“
नौका मेरी भटके जब भी
माँ, तुम ही मेरा किनारा हो,
अंधेरा मुझे घेरे जब भी
राह दिखाता तुम वो उजियारा हो;
नींद ना आए मुझको जब भी
सुलाता तुम वो आसमाँ सारा हो,
थककर हारुँ मैं जब भी
मुझको चलातीं तुम वो धारा हो।
नौका मेरी भटके जब भी
माँ, तुम ही मेरा किनारा हो,
माँ, तुम ही मेरा किनारा हो।
“
©Li’l Poet NJ ( Nikhil Jain ) 2013
Today’s Prompt: Find a shortish poem that you like, and rewrite each line, replacing each word (or as many words as you can) with words that mean the opposite.
So, here’s my poem that possesses the same meaning of the poem as that of original poem but the words replaced have opposite meanings. For this I rewrite the Poem “Life’s Own Battle” by Emma Jackson. You can read it here.
“
Wanted concord
yet you repress peace
Each time I praised you made me weaker than now
I will hold out
I will hold up
You will make me rise
I will make you give up
“
30/30 NaPoWriMo
©Li’l Poet NJ ( Nikhil Jain ) 2013
Miss you NaPoWriMo 2013!
“
A Monday
A wohlig morn,
And your sourire
Took away my corazón
A deep tavshed within
What I discover in your eyes
And in your company, my beloved!
This whole Orbis changes to Paradise.
“
29/30 NaPoWriMo
Words Used: wohlig- pleasant (German)
sourire- smile (French)
corazón- heart (Spanish)
tavshed- silence (Danish)
Orbis- Earth (Latin)
©Li’l Poet NJ ( Nikhil Jain ) 2013
“
What my eyes see above
A blue ocean lost in fog,
And floating clouds on it
Tired, slowly-slowly jog;
Blue the wind rushes
Blue the roses jingle,
And blue the swallows over my head
pass and mingle;
What my eyes see above
A blue ocean lost in fog,
And below beside me
sits a blue frog;
Blue the grass
Blue my shoes,
And then remember I
put off my goggles blue.
“
28/30 NaPoWriMo
©Li’l Poet NJ ( Nikhil Jain ) 2013
“
Whose outmost is always success
Working hands those never rest,
“An idle mind is the devil’s workshop”
which fails in every test;
After sundown,those who rise
Opportunities fade and they only weep
And its always correct that is said-
“As you sow so shall you reap”
A cactus is watered when
Neither from it, flowers are born,
nor any fruits arise from it
Only it grows with its thorns;
Labour turns stones into gold
but sloth changes it into straw’s heap
As its always correct that is said-
“As you sow so shall you reap”
Wakeful minds never give up
Defeats give up on their only way,
Stronger is their bond of Hope
That success is a little far away;
Sweeter we tasted,honey of busy bees,but
Can monkey’s mother ever be a sheep?
So, its always correct that is said-
“As you sow so shall you reap”
“
27/30 NaPoWriMo
©Li’l Poet NJ ( Nikhil Jain ) 2013
Today’s prompt is to write an erasure of own poem. So friends, Here is my erasure of my old long poem “A rabbit at my home“
Enjoy 
“
Naughty yet dear friend
faced fierce cat but defeated
Brave little rabbit
“
26/30 NaPoWriMo
©Li’l Poet NJ ( Nikhil Jain ) 2013
“
On this endless way
Daily roamer are strong winds
Only hard stones stand
“
25/30 NaPoWriMo
©Li’l Poet NJ ( Nikhil Jain ) 2013
