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April 29, 2013 / Nikhil Jain

Poem: “Paradise” (Prompt: A Poem using 5 words of different languages)


A Monday
A wohlig morn,
And your sourire
Took away my corazón
A deep tavshed within
What I discover in your eyes
And in your company, my beloved!
This whole Orbis changes to Paradise.

29/30 NaPoWriMo

Words Used: wohlig- pleasant (German)

sourire- smile (French)

corazón- heart (Spanish)

tavshed- silence (Danish)

Orbis- Earth (Latin)

©Li’l Poet NJ ( Nikhil Jain ) 2013

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  1. Libby / May 13 2013 4:48 PM

    Cleverly done.

    • Nikhil Jain / May 13 2013 9:55 PM

      Thanks Libby :)

  2. julespaige / May 23 2013 6:33 PM

    I am so glad to reconnect with you my friend. Continue writing and sharing your wonder with words.
    I am happy that Libby is highlighting your Elfje this week.

    A very interesting prompt to use and learn different lanugages!
    Cheers.

    • Nikhil Jain / May 23 2013 9:21 PM

      Hmmmm….. Welcome again!!!!

  3. purehaiku / Aug 14 2013 5:36 PM

    that’s a really neat poem Nikhil – I love the way you’ve blended the “foreign” words with the English sentences – clever!

    • Nikhil Jain / Aug 15 2013 5:46 PM

      Thanks Freya :)

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