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April 23, 2012 / Nikhil Jain

“Autumn” (Haiku Style)

This is my first Haiku poem and a different style it is….I don’t hows this whether it is good or bad.
I want to know from you…..So here’s my haiku.

Rusty Autumn Breeze
Flowing puzzled everywhere,
I stare, I wonder

22/30 NaPoWriMo 30/30

Let me know howz this?…..comments please.


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  1. mysterygirrl / Apr 23 2012 11:12 PM

    nice and really interesting style dear 🙂

    • Nikhil Jain / Apr 23 2012 11:26 PM

      Thanx di…. I hope you liked it….

      • mysterygirrl / Apr 23 2012 11:32 PM

        yaa its nice. short and sweet with a lot of hard meaning hidden!

      • Nikhil Jain / Apr 24 2012 12:38 AM

        ..Thanx di..

  2. marilyncavicchia / Apr 24 2012 10:07 AM

    I like it! The idea of the autumn breeze being “rusty” is original, and makes me think of fall leaves.

    • Nikhil Jain / Apr 24 2012 12:39 PM

      Thank you mam!

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