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April 9, 2013 / Nikhil Jain

Poem: “Mystery”


Shadow
At night
grew higher as
I reached more close
Wall

9/30 NaPoWriMo

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  1. Libby / Apr 11 2013 3:45 PM

    Nice Elfje – but as an ex-school teacher I’ m not sure about that 4th line though. Perhaps you should use ‘close’ rather than ‘closer’ ,but still the English is clumsy. Hard when you have to use 4 words!

    • Nikhil Jain / Apr 11 2013 4:19 PM

      Yor’re right! I mistook in writing close in place of closer.. Thanks!

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