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May 2, 2012 / Nikhil Jain

“Dark Hell” (Showing Space)


This poem is aimed at showing pain and feeling of loneliness.

Empty Space

No roof over the head,
No walls-windows on left-right,
No land under legs,
No door to escape outside,
Lonely in the space deep,
I am drowned
in the toxic air
with blind sight,
and dark windy weather
pushes me behind,
Away from the home
In a blank world,
I scream and shout
Where I am?
and how I reached here?
But my voice surrender
against dead silence,
Pushed and thrown
away in empty sea,
In the dark hell
dumb and deaf.

How was the poem,friends?……..let me know by your comments.

4 Comments

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  1. claudia / May 5 2012 1:07 AM

    lots of intense emotions in this…the pushed and thrown away in empty sea..the pain and loneliness can def. be felt..

    • Nikhil Jain / May 5 2012 1:54 AM

      Thanx mam🙂

  2. Archana / May 6 2012 12:05 PM

    Some depth!!

    • Nikhil Jain / May 6 2012 12:51 PM

      Thanks!

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